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Kickstart Requiem For Innocence

Journal Entry: Fri Jun 11, 2010, 10:43 AM


Backing for RFI


I read a lot of online news sites. Mostly tech news. Well, when I was reading one about a month ago, I cam across an article about Dispora, a project to make a new Facebook and how they got their funding... a website called kickstarter.com. So, being the type of person to try anything once, I decided to give it a whirl. Or rather, I elbowed my wife, and made her do it.

Ah, the joys of marriage.

Anyway, we finally got everything setup. We're doing a drive for $3,500. These funds will go towards the creation of the first issue of RFI, printing costs, shipping, the website, and most importantly, the $2000 Cintiq my wife needs to do the comic justice. We still expect to pay a lot out of pocket, but if we're going to get Requiem for Innocence told, we need help. Help from people like you!

You can pledge as little as $1. We have prizes for people who pledge $5 and over.

You can see our kickstarter page here: [link]

Revamping RFI Plot


Meanwhile, my writing skills have been on the increase. I'd love to post some of what I'm working on, but I can't. Sorry. It's not for you.

Still, with all this RFI stuff, I took a look at my script for Issue 1. I sighed. That's never a good sign. So, I went through my massive file archives, and read the first chapter of every single incarnation of RFI I've ever written. They all suffered from the same problem.

I was trying to tell an epic.

Requiem For Innocence is an epic. But I can't expect readers to try and wade through a 100 page graphic novel that reads like Lord of the Rings. I love LotR, but I'm no Tolkien. i'm just not. And I don't know how well He'd do in a graphic novel setting, actually. I'm not sure his style would fit the medium well. Both of which, I think, are reasons why I need something different.

So, I sat down to write.

What I ended up with was a short scene, 7 years before the main crisis of the RFI plot. It was simple, fun, and introduced the main character, and the character we'll be following through the first major chunk of the story. Most importantly, it was fun. Not epic, just... fun. Even better, this means I'm starting the story out explaining how David got his ship, not at the point in time he loses it. Before, I rushed to the main crisis, barely setting the scene for the reader to care about what just happened and why it's so terrible. I'm really happy with it.

I might be convinced to upload the first section today. I won't give you more of the script, but I'll give you the first section. Or a draft of it, at any rate.



  • Mood: Joy
  • Listening to: Reb Brown scream
  • Reading: Bee Keeper's Apprentice
  • Watching: House Seaon 5, Firelfy, Babylon 5
  • Playing: Mass Effect
  • Eating: Home cooked meals
  • Drinking: Water

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:icontinyelf01:
I found two poems of yours from my old laptop. I could send them to you if'n you like.

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:iconkyokoh:
Nice gallery!

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:iconneobakeneko:
Zank you for ze watch :D

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*macguyvok Aug 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
no problem. Thought I did it a while ago, found out I was wrong, so I fixed it. ;)

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:boogie:

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"Unfortunately, while all answers are replies, not all replies are answers." Ta'lon, Babylon 5
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